If one knew it was actually supposed to be a training video, i don't think i would have bothered... um... yeah... something that is entertaing would make it better... or something that evoked an emotion other than... boredom...
I liked it actually. It was simple, wasn't trying to be anythind ridiculous or hilsious. I liked it. I really liked the drawing and animation. And the computer read text worked well with the style. Keep up it up! Yeah i really liked it in some existential sitcom sort of way. But, I kind of have a place in my heart for that kind of thing.
Some of your transitions were pretty damn good I think. It was simple and it was well animated. As you know, simple doesn't equal bad. It was interesting and on a level different than most of the things here. (not saying that thats a bad thing to newgrounds)
I found some of the animation to be overly simple and boring. I also think that the drawing was somewhat crude for the drawing of the people as well as the car. I also don't like the mixing of drawn characters and appropriated images from the internet, I don't think you blended them well enough together to make it look unified.
However, I did like the use of words when they overlapped each other. It was simple and has potential. I think more interesting font or colors could snaz it up a bit. I also think that you should fill up the screen more. A little too much dead space. Ganbatte!
GaijinMuffin
All 5 flash Reviews
Rated 0 / 5 stars July 16, 2007
some info prior would have been nice...
If one knew it was actually supposed to be a training video, i don't think i would have bothered... um... yeah... something that is entertaing would make it better... or something that evoked an emotion other than... boredom...
Rated 4 / 5 stars July 12, 2007
not bad...
I liked it actually. It was simple, wasn't trying to be anythind ridiculous or hilsious. I liked it. I really liked the drawing and animation. And the computer read text worked well with the style. Keep up it up! Yeah i really liked it in some existential sitcom sort of way. But, I kind of have a place in my heart for that kind of thing.
If you have kind of place in your heart for that kind of thing, i'm delighted !
Thx for the review ! ^^
Rated 3.5 / 5 stars July 12, 2007
not bad...
Some of your transitions were pretty damn good I think. It was simple and it was well animated. As you know, simple doesn't equal bad. It was interesting and on a level different than most of the things here. (not saying that thats a bad thing to newgrounds)
Rated 2.5 / 5 stars July 11, 2007
Not bad for so little time worked on...
My only real advice is spelling is that no matter how long you work on something... spelling is important. Inspiration not Insperation.
I only spelled at the end what r u thalkin abou. Lol :D
Rated 1.5 / 5 stars July 10, 2007
Ok music, but pretty boring over all.
I found some of the animation to be overly simple and boring. I also think that the drawing was somewhat crude for the drawing of the people as well as the car. I also don't like the mixing of drawn characters and appropriated images from the internet, I don't think you blended them well enough together to make it look unified.
However, I did like the use of words when they overlapped each other. It was simple and has potential. I think more interesting font or colors could snaz it up a bit. I also think that you should fill up the screen more. A little too much dead space. Ganbatte!