Score: 0

"some info prior would have been nice..."

submission: Day in Training

date: July 16, 2007

If one knew it was actually supposed to be a training video, i don't think i would have bothered... um... yeah... something that is entertaing would make it better... or something that evoked an emotion other than... boredom...

Score: 8

"not bad..."

submission: Want a tube?

date: July 12, 2007

I liked it actually. It was simple, wasn't trying to be anythind ridiculous or hilsious. I liked it. I really liked the drawing and animation. And the computer read text worked well with the style. Keep up it up! Yeah i really liked it in some existential sitcom sort of way. But, I kind of have a place in my heart for that kind of thing.

Score: 7

"not bad..."

submission: Bite'm Amoeba

date: July 12, 2007

Some of your transitions were pretty damn good I think. It was simple and it was well animated. As you know, simple doesn't equal bad. It was interesting and on a level different than most of the things here. (not saying that thats a bad thing to newgrounds)

Score: 5

"Not bad for so little time worked on..."

submission: Luis is Movin' on Up

date: July 11, 2007

My only real advice is spelling is that no matter how long you work on something... spelling is important. Inspiration not Insperation.

Score: 3

"Ok music, but pretty boring over all."

submission: My Good Thing

date: July 10, 2007

I found some of the animation to be overly simple and boring. I also think that the drawing was somewhat crude for the drawing of the people as well as the car. I also don't like the mixing of drawn characters and appropriated images from the internet, I don't think you blended them well enough together to make it look unified.

However, I did like the use of words when they overlapped each other. It was simple and has potential. I think more interesting font or colors could snaz it up a bit. I also think that you should fill up the screen more. A little too much dead space. Ganbatte!